You see there? With only a bit more punctuation, you'd have a speech worthy of a novel, or at least one worthy of bolstering the spirits of a strapping troop of young men and women. They are rather impressionable when it comes to heroic speeches.
So, yes. Yay, you.
[And now that it was coming down to it, there were giant butterflies in his stomach. Pesky things, butterflies. They never knew when to quiet down.]
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So, yes. Yay, you.
[And now that it was coming down to it, there were giant butterflies in his stomach. Pesky things, butterflies. They never knew when to quiet down.]
There is.
When would you care to do this?